The tune emerges and now I need some lyrics. Which way to go on this one, the simplicity of Israel Houghton or the complexity of Stuart Townsend? If the lyric is too complex can it be sung? Yet I hate dumbed down worship. What to do? I know, do the anti-hit thing and write the verses very simple and the leave the chorus as complex as the mind dump that it emerged from…the unfinished result.
What I Could Never Do
Running, I was always running
Running (from the) (finish)
Reaching, you were always reaching (or chasing, You were reaching ……..)
Reaching…..(finish)
Chorus:
For as I/(while I) sinned, Your love did reach
into my heart, into this breach
that broke the very heart of God
to give His Son and spare the rod
that I deserved upon my back
O for my sin and for my lack
of righteouness in my own strength
Your Love has done what I could never do
Falling, now I’m always falling
falling deep into the arms that stretched upon a/(the) Tree
Singing, now I’m always singing
Singing of the the love of God that saved a wretch like me
Anyone want co-writer credit and piece of the CCLI royalties? Hahaha. Bring it. I’ll even email you a scratch acoustic and melody track. I wonder if the Church of the future will look at some of the songs we sing today and go, “Wow, what made them sing that?” while we fail to engage the weight of songs like How Deep the Father’s Love for Us. Worship does have a didactic element and our theologians/philosophers today for the average Joe tend to be shiny silver disks (for good or bad). And lest you yourself be challenged to dumb down the lyrics of your compositions in an attempt to make every song an easy sing, let us not forget R.E.M. who made hits by making “anti-hits.”